Study English (được phép dùng tiếng Việt)

mrwar · 4/1/11

(tôi) Nhắm mắt lại và nước mắt (tôi) tuôn rơi .

archimede · 6/1/11

Từ "cơ sở vật chất" mà bắt đầu bằng c như con- hay com- gì đấy là gì các bác nhỉ

Hanh_1990_14 · 10/1/11

Tớ đc giao viết bài essay này,compare and contrast two cities,mấy bác giúp mình check xem có sai gì ở ngữ pháp và từ vựng kô nhé,với lại nếu có thể thay thế từ nào đó formal hơn thì các bác giúp luôn nhé,tại ông thầy nhận xét mình là hay dùng nhiề từ informal :(:
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Cairo and Seoul are the capitals of their respective countries, Egypt and South Korea. While they are different in many ways, they also have several similarities. This report will analyze some features of the two capitals: Cairo and Seoul. They will be compared and contrasted in regard to area and history, status as well as their economics, and people.

Firstly, in regard to area and history, these cities have two similarities and some differences. Not only Seoul but also Cairo has the long history. Cairo, is in fact, the older of the two cities. Cairo was founded in 969 AD, and Seoul was founded in 1394. In addition, both of them are built on the banks of the River. Cairo is built on the banks of the River Nile whereas Seoul is built on banks of the Han River. On the other hand, while Seoul is located in the north-western South Korea, Cairo is located in the north-eastern Egypt. Cairo is quite smaller than Seoul. Total area of Cairo is 215 square kilometers compared to 627 square kilometers of Seoul.

Secondly, Cairo and Seoul have a great number of similarities but some differences in their status and economy. Both are capital and main commercial centre, both their economies focus on manufacturing and finance and trade. However, the capital of Egypt focuses on one more major industry: tourism. Also, while Cairo is the largest city in Africa, Seoul is just normal city in South Korea.
Finally, there is a similarity in their composition. The majority of the people in both cities are their descent origin. Cairo has a population of 95% Egyptian descent. Similarly, Seoul people are nearly all Korean.
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.[GVN]Bel · 10/1/11

cho hỏi tiếng anh bằng B là tiếng Anh đạt trình độ nào nhỉ ...

NadesicoBlue · 10/1/11

your scheme is good, but it won't succeed
< doomed > Good though.....................

Although it's fun being with her, i think she talks too much
< company > Much as I...................

I was in the middle of my speech when she interrupted me
<cut> She...............................

giúp mình nha

hoahung85 · 11/1/11

mấy bác giúp mình. Bà cô lớp ESL vừa kêu mình làm bài văn nhưng vì trình độ tiếng Anh cỏn rất kém nên nhờ mấy bác làm giùm bài văn mẫu để bík. 2 hum nữa sẽ vô lớp làm tại lớp & k đc dùng dictionary
Đề: thesis statement: There are many similarities and differences between San Diego and Ho Chi MInh City

Stuffed Frog · 11/1/11

geez, why don't u ask Hanh_1990_14 for more information

qwelam85 · 11/1/11

Hanh_1990_14 nói: ↑

Cairo and Seoul are the capitals of their respective countries, Egypt and South Korea. While they are different in many ways, they also have several similarities. This report will analyze some features of the two capitals: Cairo and Seoul. They will be compared and contrasted in regard to area and history, status as well as their economics, and people.

Firstly, in regard to area and history, these cities have two similarities and some differences. Not only Seoul but also Cairo has the long history. Cairo, is in fact, the older of the two cities. Cairo was founded in 969 AD, and Seoul was founded in 1394. In addition, both of them are built on the banks of the River. Cairo is built on the banks of the River Nile whereas Seoul is built on banks of the Han River. On the other hand, while Seoul is located in the north-western South Korea, Cairo is located in the north-eastern Egypt. Cairo is quite smaller than Seoul. Total area of Cairo is 215 square kilometers compared to 627 square kilometers of Seoul.

Secondly, Cairo and Seoul have a great number of similarities but some differences in their status and economy. Both are capital and main commercial centre, both their economies focus on manufacturing and finance and trade. However, the capital of Egypt focuses on one more major industry: tourism. Also, while Cairo is the largest city in Africa, Seoul is just normal city in South Korea.
Finally, there is a similarity in their composition. The majority of the people in both cities are their descent origin. Cairo has a population of 95% Egyptian descent. Similarly, Seoul people are nearly all Korean.
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1: Dont use repeatable word, this mean u have low vocabulary.
Example: in regard to. U could use aspect instead.
2:Ur second part, all of them is about economy so dont need status anymore.
"Also, while Cairo is the largest city in Africa, Seoul is just normal city in South Korea." is not about status but location.
3:Ur last part, composition is not population. U only can use composition of the population.
4: area need to be replaced by location or physical feature.
5: There are many sentences that are too short and simple such as:
Cairo is quite smaller than Seoul.
U could rewrite:
Seoul is nearly triple the size of Cairo, 627 square kilometers compared with 215 square kilometers.

hoahung85 · 14/1/11

Giup mình check giùm bài viết này và nghĩ xem có thể thêm gì vô đó k vì bài quá ngắn & giúp mình làm đoạn kết nữa, mình nghĩ nát óc k ra. Thông cảm vì mình chỉ mới ở mức beginning thôi :)

This is second month I’m in San Diego. I come from Vietnam, I come here with my family. I used to live in HCM city but now I live in here, San Diago city. I think everything in here is great.

When I live in here, I can see difference between San Diago City and Ho Chi Minh city. In Ho Chi Minh city, everybody drive motorbike. These houses are close and contexture on street. Everyone can open a store in their house. In San Diego, people drive cars. Every houses aren’t close. Everyone doesn’t open store in their house. Students go to school by bus and go to home by bus too.

There are many similarities between San Diego and Ho Chi Minh city are someone do exercise every morning. People come back to work of day at morning. The childrens go to school to learn everything good for us.
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|\/|r.|<or · 14/1/11

cho tớ hỏi chữ just đọc âm tr hay d thế
trên google nó đọc là tr
trên vdict.com nó đọc là d
chả biết thế nào nữa =.=

Wittgenstein · 14/1/11

vd!ck
fify .

|\/|r.|<or · 15/1/11

^ thế rốt cuộc khi đọc thì nên tra = thằng nào vậy bạn mà chữ just đọc nàm sao

Wittgenstein · 15/1/11

http://lmgtfy.com/?q=just
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|\/|r.|<or · 15/1/11

thx cậu , biết là google dùng đc nhưng chỉ sợ ko biết ở đâu đọc đúng
mà làm cái link kiểu ấy làm sao vậy

Wittgenstein · 15/1/11

http://lmgtfy.com/?q=lmgtfy .

papen · 16/1/11

|\/|r.|<or nói: ↑

cho tớ hỏi chữ just đọc âm tr hay d thế
trên google nó đọc là tr
trên vdict.com nó đọc là d
chả biết thế nào nữa =.=
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Không phải tr với d đâu, nó lai giữa âm d với gi. J phát âm giống giờ như mà khép răng lại rồi đẩy hơi bật mạnh ra với răng mở.
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This is the second month which I’m in San Diego. I came from Vietnam and I came here with my family. I used to live in Ho Chi Minh city but now I live in here, San Diago city (có thể bỏ câu này vì câu trước đã nói sống 2 tháng ở SD rồi). I think San Diego is a great city. (dùng in here nhiều quá nghe không hay)

In here, I can see there're many differences between San Diago City and Ho Chi Minh city. In Ho Chi Minh city, everybody drives motorbikes. These houses are close and contexture on street (không hiểu câu này lắm). Everyone can open a store in their house. In San Diego, people drive cars. Every houses aren’t closed. Everyone doesn’t open store in their house. Câu này có thể rút gọn thành : It's completely opposite with San Diego where you need to get a license to open a store and every families have cars as main transportation There is school bus in America and it's very convenient (Dùng bus ở VN không có sao?? Với lại ở Mĩ, trẻ con từ cấp 1 đến 2 cha mẹ rước không à, hoặc dùng school bus. Lên high school thì có car rồi bus gì nữa.)
In the other hand, There are also many similarities between San Diego and Ho Chi Minh city. In my hometown, people like to exercise every morning. People come back to work of day at morning (không hiểu). The childrens go to school to learn everything good for us (không hiểu).

hoahung85 · 17/1/11

tks bạn. Mình làm bài viết 2 ngày trước :d
close mình dùng với nghĩa: gần nhau, sát nhau
The children go to school to learn everything good for us. (Trẻ em đến trường học những điều tốt cho chúng (do nhất thời mình k nhớ đến từ student))

Sunoflife · 17/1/11

hoahung85 nói: ↑

tks bạn. Mình làm bài viết 2 ngày trước :d
close mình dùng với nghĩa: gần nhau, sát nhau
The children go to school to learn everything good for us. (Trẻ em đến trường học những điều tốt cho chúng (do nhất thời mình k nhớ đến từ student))
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For them chứ bạn? ?

NadesicoBlue · 19/1/11

NadesicoBlue nói: ↑

your scheme is good, but it won't succeed
< doomed > Good though..................... failure

Although it's fun being with her, i think she talks too much
< company > Much as I................... talkative

ai giúp mình điiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii :(

I was in the middle of my speech when she interrupted me
<cut> She...............................

giúp mình nha
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ai giúp mình điiii

Sunoflife · 19/1/11

your scheme is good, but it won't succeed
< doomed > Good though your scheme may be, but it's doomed to fail.
Although it's fun being with her, i think she talks too much
< company > Much as I enjoy her company, she's too talkative.
I was in the middle of my speech when she interrupted me
<cut> She cut in on the middle of my speech.

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