IELTS test

zZNewAssassinZz · 29/11/13

Hi guys, I am going to take the IELTS test on 30 Nov 2013. I am practicing a lot but I still have a bunch of problem with my grammar. It is not perfect and can take away my mark. If you have time, please take a look and correct grammar mistakes in my essay. It is impossible to correct myself. Cheers & have a nice day!

Writing task 1

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in regard of changing my course at Lavender College. I have currently enrolled to Health Science faculty as 2nd year student and I have completed all of 1st year subject.
Decision has been made due to the following clue. I found that Health Science is not my major because I am not enthusiastic in doing relating subjects. I prefer to participate in other fields that I can find my passion to build up skill for future career.
Computer Science is interesting and it is the one I would like to move on. My parents are both software developers so I already have a wide knowledge that I have achieved in years from them. Moreover, I was developed computer skill by self-practice and reading books with all of my passion.
I apologise for any inconvenient this may cause to you and the staff and look forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
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Writing task 2

The power of high tech media is beyond what people can imagine. The definition of “high tech media” can be considered as an ambiguous term for all kinds of high quality digital media with a diverse background in entertainment, advertising and project management. However, the term as used in this paper refers to library media.

Debate of costs is drawing a certain amount of attention related to low budget. For instance, the upgrade of DVDs drags on continuous requirements for DVD players or computers. Hence, it occupies an expensive price for investment and maintenance. However, costly payment would result in high quality service.

Usability of videos, DVDs, and software hooks the heart of billion users around the world. In fact, nighty five percent of US libraries is rendered with the Internet and digital media. Their users can easily make requests of long distanced borrowing or renewing books. As a result, it is convenient. Another case that involved digital media to highly recommend was visual instruction. Although people stated that wide range of knowledge is hidden inside a bunch of papers. There was no chance for readers to achieve first-hand experience from texts. On the contrary, visual tutorials providing in DVDs can point out thoroughly many aspects of implementation on screen without physically visited or seen the objects. Thus, media is priceless resources for learning.

In conclusion, it is essential to equip library with multiple benefits from high tech media without any doubts or questions. The strength of books is far away from technologies
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SOZUOKA · 30/11/13

So, eh, how was your test ?

zZNewAssassinZz · 1/12/13

Not good, I may achieve band of 5.5 or 6 in writing

Zadkiel · 22/5/14

How long does it take to prepare for IELTS exams? 1 year?

DevVn · 22/5/14

Depends on the target grade.

For a 4.0 Ielts, I don't think it takes more than 2 months. Another half a years, from 4.0 to 6.0. Above 6.0 may forever be a dream if you don't really beat your ass learning. Though within 2 months, I went from 4.5 to 6.5; and went from 6.5 to 8.0 without studying English at all.

God damn ~~ I'm awesome!

Máy Bắn Đá · 28/5/14

Avoid excessively long and short sentences like:
The definition of “high tech media” can be considered as an ambiguous term for all kinds of high quality digital media with a diverse background in entertainment, advertising and project management.
As a result, it is convenient.

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